[R18] Dali Temple.Qing (Shuangjie solves the case 1v1) – “Dali Temple. Qing (Shuangjie 1v1 solves the case)” conclusion and next book [English]
by“Which is a more serious mistake, wrongly accusing a good person or wrongfully acquitting a bad person?”
The story of “Dali Temple. Qing” started from a casual chat between me and a gay friend one day.
We all chose to “wrongfully accuse good people”, but when I tried to discern the logic behind it, I encountered difficulties.
I inquired, sought confirmation, and thought, and in this process, Mr. Su, who was a “superior”, and Lin Lushi, who was an “ordinary person”, were born.
So I decided to write a story that brought these two opposite extremes together.
They need to be very different, but they need to have a touchable connection; they need to have common beliefs, but also have different ways of doing things; they need to have their own perseverance, but they can continue to grow and become better versions of themselves because of each other.
It took three months to prepare and three months to write, which lasted more than half a year.
I read through psychology, methodology and some historical materials and papers.
I wrote three editions of the outline, with at least 30,000 words of detailed outline, character design, and background story; there is also a handwritten draft, more than 30 densely packed pages of A4 paper…
Writing like this is really stupid.
But fortunately, this is only my second year of writing, and the third original book I have finished. I gave myself three years to get started, and the first ten books were all just writing exercises.
This is just the beginning.
There should be friends in the post who have read it since the first one. I don’t know if you have discovered it. In fact, in each book, I will add a section of exercises based on the previous one.
The first one is about choosing words and sentences. I just want to complete a story.
The second book is character design. I tried to write a character with some characteristics.
The third book is Tension. I added “women disguising themselves as men” and set the background of the story in “Dali Temple”.Many plots in the story are designed deliberately for tension.
For example, the early role of the character Wei Shu, the part where the two pretended to be husband and wife, and the “stupid dog” who always exposed Mr. Su’s heart…
For the sake of tension, I deliberately fast-paced this story, with almost no subplots. From beginning to end, the camera only focused on the male and female protagonists.Because this way everyone’s focus will not be easily distracted and it will be easier to follow.
Of course, there are drawbacks to this.
Without sub-lines, many of the character’s settings other than emotions would appear illusory and impossible to implement.
There are also two emotional transitions in the early part of the story that were too sudden – this was also a compromise I made in order to speed up the fleshing out.
Before writing this book, except for “The Sherlock Holmes” and “No Survival”, I had not read other suspense novels, let alone detective romances.
The rape and murder case refers to the notorious serial killer Ed Gein in American history. Xiao Jingyan and Princess Anyang can only write a few random words…
So I have repeatedly emphasized that this is just a sweet story, and I haven’t even touched the point of the suspenseful criminal investigation.
These are all issues that I plan to improve.
Emotional lines and plot lines will be the focus of the next book.
Then, I will have more books to read, and I probably won’t be able to publish any new ones until the end of the year.
So I don’t dare to state my true opinion categorically. I can only say, let it all happen and see you again.
Finally, thank you all for your company these days.The happiest thing about writing is slowly constructing the story and then finding a group of people to share it with.
Human beings’ joys and sorrows are not the same.
This sentence is both correct and incorrect.
When I write a joke and giggle or cry at the screen, and you see that joke also giggle or cry at the screen, our joys and sorrows are connected.
I like this feeling of a chance encounter turning into a reunion after a long absence.
The so-called happiness means that I have a story to tell you.
You say, okay.
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In my initial thoughts, the setting of the next book may be slightly adjusted, but the characters will not change.
This is a story that I have wanted to write a long time ago. I was afraid that I would not be able to write it well, so I never started writing it. Now I plan to give it a try.After all, apart from being shameless, I have no other advantages.
Copywriting:
Hua Yang is the assassin known as “Faceless” in the world.
She is not really faceless, but everyone who has seen her true appearance has become a dead soul under the sword without exception.
She comes and goes as she pleases without a trace. Killing is her hobby and the only thing she is good at.
But it wasn’t until she met Song Yunzhi that she discovered that there were things in the world that were more addictive to her than killing people.
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With a century-old family and loyal generations, the young Prime Minister Song Yunzhi is a well-deserved civil servant and moral model of Nanqi.Everyone praises “There are hundreds of officials in Nanqi, which are unparalleled in the world.”
he has always believed that people are born different.Evil people can only do evil in this life, and they cannot be saved, and he does not care.
By chance, he saved a poor little mute.
“A good person has to do good deeds throughout his life to achieve enlightenment, while a bad person can become a Buddha immediately by just putting down his butcher knife. Do you think this world is unfair?”
“But for evil people, it is not necessarily easier to put down the butcher’s knife than it is for good people to do good deeds throughout their lives.”
“But I just want to go to hell. There are eighteen levels. How interesting.”
“Well, then I’ll accompany you.”
This is a story about she laying down her butcher knife for him, and he overturning the mountains and rivers for her.
Let’s call it “The Rebellion” for now.
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